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21 November, 2010

Friends

This post was originally written for Gingerchai.com and it is written in exactly 300 words





Having lost his wife to atrocities of poverty five years back; he was the loneliest person on earth. He had such a zilch of presence that his demise would not have mattered to anyone. Anyone, except one or two occasional pedestrians passing by the traffic signal, opposite the big shopping mall; where he pestered them for alms. If not begging, he would while away his time seated on the pavement and watching the mannequin day and night. The lifeless wooden doll replied with equal intensity staring back. It would communicate silently with eyes, breaking away the contact only when one of the storekeepers changed its position or when it was being dressed or undressed. Every time, the dresses changed, it would seek the approval of the beggar and he would nod his compliments in return; his lips, a tad parted as if in exclamation and awe of the dress. In truth, he was happy to have some company. It was comforting enough to know that there was someone aware of his existence. By now, he was sure that the doll would scan the roads and miss him, once he was gone. It was comforting enough to know that his existence mattered to something.

Fortunes changed when a frustrated passerby dropped a lottery ticket in his bowl and the ticket won him amounts he can never define. He was rich overnight. Mansions, servants, cars, women – he could have bought anything with his newly found riches but, all he did was to barge into the shopping mall and bargain for the mannequin, buying it for himself and himself alone. It was the only companion and the only friend he needed to live. Some friendships are simply invaluable. They were friends when he was indigent and they will be friends in riches too. 

12 OPINIONS:

subtlescribbler said...

wow...wow! simply amazing..its not just touching but has an element of irony and mystery too. i had read a story wich was quite similar to this one but the two can't actually be compared. goood workk :)
and i shifted to blogger btw!

Md. Muddassir Shah said...

Shifted to blogger??
I thought you were supposed to get a domain of your own?
What happened to that??

thanks for your kind words :)

Zainab Urooj said...

Good read.

Md. Muddassir Shah said...

Hey Zainab,
Welcome back

subtlescribbler said...

i shifted so that i have to do less of technical wrk;)and domain thing is still in process....

Md. Muddassir Shah said...

Nice nice, welcome to this part of Blogosphere :)

Devil Incarnate... said...

Good one... with elements of mystery and a perfect end..

Sadiya Merchant said...

different frm ur usual style....bt nice :-)

Purba said...

Loved reading this one. You have a flair for short stories.

Md. Muddassir Shah said...

Purba,
Thank you sooo much.
I am glad you read and liked it :)

Md. Muddassir Shah said...

@Sadiya,
Thanks for your valuable comments

Md. Muddassir Shah said...

@DevilIncarnate,
Thanks much :)